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By: Martin Cantor

Would love to see/hear some more detail about particular issues that recurred, any words or phrases that were particularly tough, any examples of successive iterations you could share.

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By: David

The 'words to avoid' list made me smile. Words to avoid include "promote (unless you are talking about an ad campaign or something)" **** "..... or something" **** !! Well that's clear then! I'd...

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By: nettienwilliams

In reply to David. Thanks for pointing that out David. We'll change it so it's clearer.

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By: nettienwilliams

In reply to Martin Cantor. Dear Martin, Many thanks for your enquiry. Our policies have not been signed off yet, so I am unable to share iteration examples. Recurrent issues centred around using plain...

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By: Martin Cantor

In reply to nettienwilliams. OK and thanks for expansion. Looking forward to seeing it all. Best Martin

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By: Martin Cantor

In reply to David. Oh and btw, if you haven't already you might want to check out the list of words to avoid that the LGA produced a couple of years ago (and got roundly traduced for in some media)

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By: Watching Inside Government evolve | Government Digital Service

[...] It wasn’t just the product that became clearer. Some of the communication with GDS has been muddy, as Paola Wright mentioned in her blog post. [...]

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By: This week at GDS | Government Digital Service

[...] of Inside Government. John Turnbull from BIS blogged about some of that work earlier in the week, as did Paola Wright from the MOD.  Thanks John and [...]

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